The first, and most important, concept I need to add to my paper is the idea of finding meaning and purpose. It is important for me to introduce the idea that the use of the internet is negatively impacting how young people find purpose in my thesis. Not only do I have to incorporate this in my thesis, I also need to add it throughout the entire paper. The next important thing I need to do is make sure my paper contains less summary. My own personal claims need to be stronger and only supported by the articles instead of being the other way around. The last thing I need to go over in the organization of my paper. It is important to make sure my ideas are presented in an order that will allow the reader to follow my paper easily and allows it to flow better.
